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PostSubject: Save Me!Poem by abc   Wed Feb 20, 2008 7:04 am

rate nyo nlng di ko nga alam kung poem yan eh ala rhyme yan

Life is good Life is great
But that shadow of the past brings it to a doom
The darkness covers my soul with loneliness and hatred
Save me!Save me! from this world

Memories of the past blocked the path
The path which leads to eternal happiness
The darkness can't be slayed The shadows are hard to forget
The loneliness may lead us to death

SAve me from this hallowed chambers of darkness
And help me recover from the dark past
Souls will be cured Minds will be lured
I wish I can be free............

You're the only one that can save me
from this pain and suffering
please find me from this chambers
and lets walk together t the path of light....


yun lng nawala CLE notebook ko eh nandun yung original n2
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PostSubject: Fart   Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:43 am

Arrow Fart is something,[hr]In the nose it's unpleasing[hr]it's often together with nature's calling[hr]It sounded like burp[hr]but it's good like purple flurp.[hr] lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 22, 2008 6:26 am

tae mag post ka ng sarili mong tread
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PostSubject: I rate it 8...   Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:10 pm

8 ang rate ko dahil ok lang yung poem...
hehe...
hi caldi....
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:26 am

8 lng T_T
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:40 am

I'll rate it 10 ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Mon Feb 25, 2008 3:40 am

THX kyla ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 2:22 am

Nae-emo na si Caldi!!! waaahahahaha!!

jowk lang... Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:10 am

Inspired na cya mag-write ng mga poem...pra kanino kaya? ^_^
reminds me of som1...T_T
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:11 am

sino nareremind mo
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:13 am

uhhh...
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:14 am

si uhhh?
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:15 am

I dont wanna type about her...I dont know any more...
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 4:16 am

Ja****
a) wine
b)spice
c)nike
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:29 am

iJdR! wrote:
Inspired na cya mag-write ng mga poem...pra kanino kaya? ^_^
reminds me of som1...T_T
kooooopallllllllll bish
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 12:58 am

ha ha ha...
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:34 am

dkoa magetsssssssssssssssssssssssssss

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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:38 am

looooooool

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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 2:26 am

ang labooooo No

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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:20 am

ganun ang mga poems...malabo...pag ako nag poem medyo malabo...still working on it...^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Save Me!Poem by abc   Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:08 am

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