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PostSubject: Last time in may hayzzz   Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:27 am

Ito longest poem kong ginawa ginawa ko to for 3days hayzzzz
NOw READ IT
need feedback

I remember that time,
That time in late May.
When I first met you,
I didn't know what to say.

Finally I had the courage,
We soon became close friends.
Soon it became love,
But then it was the end,

We soon grew apart,
And it grew more long.
When I went to visit you,
I found out you were gone.

I was distraught,
Then I could see.
I thought you had gone,
And had left me.

But we were still in touch,
And both were still in love.
We sent each other text messages,
About roses and about doves.

At first we were still in touch,
By email and by phone.
But then you sent me a shocking email,
Which hurt me in every bone.

You said it was over,
between you and me.
And how it wouldn't work,
And now I could see.

We first met in May,
But it ended in July.
We were both in love,
Then we both said goodbye.


hayz yun lng thx for reading

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PostSubject: Re: Last time in may hayzzz   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:02 am

no offense pero...masyado ata ito literal...
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PostSubject: Re: Last time in may hayzzz   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:17 am

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PostSubject: Re: Last time in may hayzzz   Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:17 pm

yeee!
para kay mavi!
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