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PostSubject: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:22 am

its a poem/lyrics i wrote...its my first so plz bear w/ me...^_^

[center]You left me bleeding
You had no feeling
You made me fall
And I kept coming back for more
Now you have closed my door
And it was my heart
You kicked it and tore it apart

You lied
You lied
You lied
You lied to me

Now what's left in me is revenge
Your words from what you've said
I'm gonna knock on your door
Gonna make you experience what i bore
Tell me the reasons what you made me for

I hear you crying
The words you said while you're dying
I made you crawl
And you kept dying for more
I got your blood no the floor
And on it was your heart
I stabbed and tore it apart

You cried
You cried
You cried
You cried for me

Now what's left in me is revenge
Your words from what you've said
I'm gonna knock on your door
Gonna make you experience what i bore
Tell me the reasons what you made me for
There's really nothing left but revenge
And a stabbing memory of you
Remember the words we exchanged
While you're drowning in your blood's own pool
Take my revenge
Take it
Take it
Just take it
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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 2:25 am

wooooooooooo galing ni jadri at alam ko kung para kanino

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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:01 am

UGNH!
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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:01 am

reply ka nman sa tread ko T_T

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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:01 am

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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:47 am

aww what a nice p0em...
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PostSubject: Re: Gimme me a cup of revenge please...   Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:14 pm

haha! tnx!
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